In the 2nd article, I think that the most important to the profession is “The expanding world of engineers.”
From the day human started to civilize, things in this world started to change. From the basic needs like food, clothing, accommodation and even transportation have been improved years by years to make human more comfortable and convenient. Well, this all need to thank the great development and improvement of the technology by the creation of scientist and the improvising of the engineers led us come to a world now that we can have. And now, we have come to the expanding world of engineers.
In the article mention, as time passed, engineers are becoming so keen due to the need of the companies, organization and even nations. Engineers now are not just only building tunnels, or just manufacturing cars and aeroplans. They are far more beyond than that. Engineers are now highly needed to design and mange health-care systems, run data and a lot more as the grow of economy.
To cope up the demand of the society, more and more students are trained on this field. However, back to the day, only males and rarely considered to join this field, but currently, we can see that more and more females are joining in and are being active to contribute and make the people in this world for a better place to stay.
As we can see more and more students are joining this field to be an engineer, but this doesn’t mean that the world will be sufficient for engineers. The reason is because, this is not a stop for engineers to along. Great challenges are await them to accomplish like global warming, food, security and many more. Consequently, the demand of engineers will not stop until the earth stop it’s revolving.
From the day human started to civilize, things in this world started to change. From the basic needs like food, clothing, accommodation and even transportation have been improved years by years to make human more comfortable and convenient. Well, this all need to thank the great development and improvement of the technology by the creation of scientist and the improvising of the engineers led us come to a world now that we can have. And now, we have come to the expanding world of engineers.
In the article mention, as time passed, engineers are becoming so keen due to the need of the companies, organization and even nations. Engineers now are not just only building tunnels, or just manufacturing cars and aeroplans. They are far more beyond than that. Engineers are now highly needed to design and mange health-care systems, run data and a lot more as the grow of economy.
To cope up the demand of the society, more and more students are trained on this field. However, back to the day, only males and rarely considered to join this field, but currently, we can see that more and more females are joining in and are being active to contribute and make the people in this world for a better place to stay.
As we can see more and more students are joining this field to be an engineer, but this doesn’t mean that the world will be sufficient for engineers. The reason is because, this is not a stop for engineers to along. Great challenges are await them to accomplish like global warming, food, security and many more. Consequently, the demand of engineers will not stop until the earth stop it’s revolving.
2 comments:
I like your concluding statement "Consequently, the demand of engineers will not stop until the earth stop it’s revolving." it is a very strong way of showing that the demand for engineers will never stop instead of writing it out bluntly.
I strongly agree on your point that the world of engineers will continue expand till the end of the world (hopefully there will never be a day..), which can be seen as the most important thing to engineers. Your concluding sentence is quite solid which is very good. My suggestion could be that you might want to polish the language a little bit since there are a few grammatical errors, especially for the first sentence.
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